what do you think of this story?

There was once a girl who lived a sheltered life,
everyday was something new and happy,
and then a wizard saw her pure soul
and he came up to her with an evil intention
the girl knows he's bad, it's obvious

Thw wizard told her," I give you the ability to speak to the deaf,
but once you have the ability,
you will die after one month.

The girl thought about it...
and said yes

From then on, she could speak and sing to the deaf
until when the day comes
when she laid on the bed with her family around her
"Are you sure of this?" They asked.
"It's my life anyway," she said with a smile

As she passed on,
the wizard collected her pure soul,
to use for his spell to spread sickness,
but what he didn't know was the soul could think for itself
and the spell didn't work

Through his frustrated tears
he saw a girl laughing and smiling

The thing here is if the girl refused,
the wizard will not be able to cast the spell
and she still have her precious life.

What do you think?